Item: Love Unfolding
Rating: 4.8
Author: Hannahchan

HannahchanLv124yr

2020-05-26 04:15

Adorei essa novel. Um dos yuris mais fofos e com um relacionamento mais natural que já li. Recomendo lerem. Eu me apaixonei pela MC, o romance dela com a Erika é bem construindo e seu relacionamento progride naturalmente. 😍☺️

Love Unfolding

viLelouch

4.7

116 Chs

Liked by 5 people

Replies5

viLelouchAuthor

Hello there... as much as I appreciate your review, I wish and hope I could understand 😭... but anyways, I’m still happy as your ‘emoji’ used are happy ones so I assumed that this is a positive review and that you like it. Hehehe... Thanks again. Ps : but I would love this more if you wrote this in English. 😊

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viLelouchAuthor

4yr

HannahchanLv12

Well, I did give a positive review. I really liked your novel. What I meant in my previous comment is that I loved this novel and that it was one of the cutest yuris with the most natural relationship I've ever read. I fell in love with MC, or her romance with Erika is very constructive and her relationship progresses naturally. I didn't comment in English before because it's not my native language, I'm still trying to learn better English by reading various types of novels, but I still don't have much confidence in my writing, so I'm sorry if my English is strange 😅☺️🤗

viLelouch:Hello there... as much as I appreciate your review, I wish and hope I could understand 😭... but anyways, I’m still happy as your ‘emoji’ used are happy ones so I assumed that this is a positive review and that you like it. Hehehe... Thanks again. Ps : but I would love this more if you wrote this in English. 😊

4yr

HannahchanLv12

viLelouch:Hello there... as much as I appreciate your review, I wish and hope I could understand 😭... but anyways, I’m still happy as your ‘emoji’ used are happy ones so I assumed that this is a positive review and that you like it. Hehehe... Thanks again. Ps : but I would love this more if you wrote this in English. 😊

4yr

viLelouchAuthor

My gosh... 😱... now dear, I encourage you to confident with your english ‘cause it’s already good—as in good. Okay? You are doing well with it. Also, thank you and I’m glad you like my work. Gosh, so happy and hope to have aboard till this novel ends. 😊

Hannahchan:Well, I did give a positive review. I really liked your novel. What I meant in my previous comment is that I loved this novel and that it was one of the cutest yuris with the most natural relationship I've ever read. I fell in love with MC, or her romance with Erika is very constructive and her relationship progresses naturally. I didn't comment in English before because it's not my native language, I'm still trying to learn better English by reading various types of novels, but I still don't have much confidence in my writing, so I'm sorry if my English is strange 😅☺️🤗

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