Review Detail of amaturewriter in LEEK THE SAIYAJIN

dude...pls fix the structure atleast, its hard to read.....the grammar is messed upto but I suppose english aint your main lang so try to improve but damn man the structure is all ****ed up...couldnt understand ****....ex: did the ex-bestfriend sleep with MC's mom or is it vise versa?, couldn't understand what happened there.....point is, try atleast fix the grammer