Review Detail of _Kaitlin_ in My Will is Supreme[Rewrite]

The two chapters basically sums up almost every transmigration out there. Weak dude gets OP Power and starts having sex while using said powers. This was really fast paced, so, no wonder it was dropped. I couldn’t see it getting far with how it eas going. The grammar was ok but the paragraphs were really long. Like, so long they’re practically the entire chapter without stopping. This made it really hard to read as I progressed. Luckily the chapters were only fuve pages with my font size and type I read at. Anyways, that’s basically all I have to say about this... So... yeah...