Review Detail of SolAce in How I Met My Future Husband

Now, there are a few issues in my opinion, but I hope you take this advice as constructive criticism and don’t stress over this ! Every author has their weak points, so it’s not just you. 1. I say this to a lot of people: spacing in between sentences makes it so much better for the reader to read your book. Although this book is not bad in this aspect, I think it could be improved by spacing the different people’s dialogues or shortening some paragraphs into 4-5 sentences max. 2. The dialogue is sort of choppy. While I get the gist of the conversation, I don’t feel like I’m either talking with the characters or getting the feeling they are “alive”. I would suggest rereading your dialogues aloud since it would probably help you pick out lengthy sentences or awkward phrasing. 3. Definitely needs some grammar/punctuation touch ups. Like I can see missing commas and certain wording that could be altered to improve the storyline. 4. Also, I know you said that Matt fell in love with her because she was different. But maybe you should give him a little more interaction with her instead of just saying it in chapter 2. ( This is actually my personal opinion; since you are the author, you should decide whether you want to alter portions of the story. ) 5. World background is not really there. I mean, I can understand and imagine to a certain extent, but I feel like you could do with more surrounding details. These are some of the major problems I have with your book; however, I know you have done your best and that you can’t see everything. So keep up the good work author ! Also, if you have discord, I can give you some more pointers and assist you with the problems I listed above. Feel free to comment below if you want my help ! (*´∇｀*)