I low key have a complaint, idk who edited this or if it’s even edited but the flow of words are choppy and at times hard to understand. It reads like a MTL a little annoyed but nothing I can’t handle, and the idea of the plot is good it’s definitely something I would want to read but rn it’s all over the place. And the thing that made me want to write a comment is the fact that it said ‘my mother is Indian in my father was a Christian’ ...... maybe it got lost in the translation but Indian isn’t a religion. I think it probably meant Hindi I know lord Krishna is a god from that but yeah .... maybe if someone edited and polishes it I’ll come back but for now I got to go.
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