I want to suggest the author to get a volunteer proofreader or editor. It's so confusing to read it (even for 1 chapter). Sorry if I sound so harsh, No offense.... wish you good luck to finish the story, don't be discouraged because of my comment and critic. Wish you all the best author! Fighting!
Titu_Thatal
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LIKEWhat I mean of counfusing is the grammar. The grammar was a messed. I know that my grammar is bad too, but I hope as an author, the author can ask for a volunteer editor to help her/him to make a better story to read.
Daoist284716:Itâs confusing at first but when you read it everything adds up