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This is stupid.....meaning its cliche....IE: MC is an SI in another world, his new body is a rich young master who was a cunt, he gains a gold finger, becomes super handsome, and well what comes next anyone can imagine....MC gains all the chicks attention only cause MC is OP and good looking and the MC is interested in them only cause they look good...****ty cliche story with ****ty romance.....its overdone is what I am trying to tell.... maybe change?....EX: MC hides his power, likes a shadow emperor, wheres a "mask" and fools everyone, secret identity of a person who is the leader of an ORG? but MC hides it, in school/ life he is normal....build the romance,,,,dont do some ****ty ****,,,like MC only liking his lovers cause they look good and they liking him cause he looks good and is OP

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Ty, looking for reviews like this. I actually think the same and decided to change a few things. Don't worry, I will try to make it unique and the romance will be interesting too. Stick with the story, give tips and we can make it beautiful;)