It's quite okay. The prolog hooked me real good. It was written beautifully and I had high expectations for the actual story. Unfortunately after the prolog the writing quality dropped massively. It's as if the prolog and the rest are written by two different persons. Since I have high requirements in terms of grammar and so on I can only drop this story for now. If the author decides to rewrite wome things I will come back
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