Review Detail of FireCircus in Psychic Inventor In Cultivation World (Hiatus)

The Novel has many positive points, the writing is clear (although it is missing full stops and commas, but it is not a problem) the stability is good, the development of the story is good (the lower realm was explained very well.) The characters are somewhat unique and intriguing, the world is also very interesting. The problem with the novel is that it gets really annoying at many parts how the MC just doesn't take steps with his harem. He seems like a smart guy and brave guy but when it comes to his harem he turns to meek person. He jokes about taking a step forward in their relationship, but can't deliver. It was especially excruciating when the Author gave him a baby, while maintaining his virginity. Don't get me wrong the MC is well developed in all the other areas and you will definitely enjoy his character. Well overall the Novel has many amazing characteristics, the world created is amazing, the progression is great and character are unique. It just gets repetitive when he finds a beautiful girl - flirts - she likes him - he turns beta and leaves. But that is not a big enough of a problem, the story in itself has many more redeeming features. It deserves the five stars and the Author can take whatever route he wishes. This is just my view of the novel, it might not be the same for everyone. Good luck and continue the great work.