Review Detail of wizzard42 in Psychic Inventor In Cultivation World (Hiatus)
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Great novel! Unlike the feeling of catching up and having no more chapters to read. The story gives a fresh feeling and the borrows from other places are not defining it. My only complaint is the repeated mistakes of using the wrong similarly sounding words as substitutes then->than man<->men ruins->runes/ruens And so on. I'd gladly volunteer myself an editor for it. Looking forward to future development 😄
Psychic Inventor In Cultivation World (Hiatus)
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Forgot to mention some improvement in language usage has been observed in latest tens of chapters (as of 130). It has gone up somewhere between half and one rank (or maybe they're just more edited?). As a recommendation to the author when s/he not writing new chapters, you could brush up on when and how perfect and past tenses are used, when to use a or an in front of a noun( the rule is really simple, if it starts with either a,i,u,o,e you use 'an' (to avoid the double vowels), and maybe a small revisit to the irregular verbs section. Otherwise, keep up the good work! Cheers!
Lol that staff about when to use a or an (when is a,I,o,u,e), are you sure is just that? If yes.... why the fk my teachers never mentioned anything about it 🙄?
wizzard42:Forgot to mention some improvement in language usage has been observed in latest tens of chapters (as of 130). It has gone up somewhere between half and one rank (or maybe they're just more edited?). As a recommendation to the author when s/he not writing new chapters, you could brush up on when and how perfect and past tenses are used, when to use a or an in front of a noun( the rule is really simple, if it starts with either a,i,u,o,e you use 'an' (to avoid the double vowels), and maybe a small revisit to the irregular verbs section. Otherwise, keep up the good work! Cheers!
It's the general rule that covers most cases, you can check this out for more info: https://***.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/a-versus-an
Zeroinfinit:Lol that staff about when to use a or an (when is a,I,o,u,e), are you sure is just that? If yes.... why the fk my teachers never mentioned anything about it 🙄?