Hello Readers, It's the Author here I wrote this review to tell the new readers about the novel because many readers give the same complaint later on - There are many grammatical errors in the novel especially until chapter 89 because it's still going through editing these things will improve after that - Those who think that this is one of those novels which has a lot of sarcasm in it then guys it's not like that...and as for those who said that I was making Chinese look good than others then listen carefully I am not even Chinese so there is no use finding that excuse - The name of the characters in this novel is not based on one country... And I am not talking about one volume but the whole novel - Many of MC's decision are explained in later on chapters so don't predict it or make any sarcastic comments on it too early - The last one is for those who write their review after reading one or two chapters. I am looking for readers, not Judges - One more thing it's better if you guys can look at the tags before reading the novel...because I just can't change somethings in the novel even if I want to Thank you for reading that far although I may make a lot of grammar mistakes for now however I can still promise you a good story!😼😼

Stumbled upon the novel completely by accident and to my great surprise, it turned out to be the rarest hidden gem among the "system" genre. I'm now in chapter 219 and the novel is amazing. Read in one breath. There are no holes in the plot, there is no cliché (the concept of the story is old, executed in a new way, even the system itself is more like an assistant), the MC is adequate & remembers that he has experience of life on Earth (usually this is forgotten starting from Chapter 2) and uses the accumulated knowledge in a new environment. The author presented a world with great potential for development and opportunities for the MC. I wish Kennny7 all the best, lightness in creativity and new ideas. And for those reading this review - if the tags suit you, spend a little of your time reading, you will not regret!

Great novel! Unlike the feeling of catching up and having no more chapters to read. The story gives a fresh feeling and the borrows from other places are not defining it. My only complaint is the repeated mistakes of using the wrong similarly sounding words as substitutes then->than man<->men ruins->runes/ruens And so on. I'd gladly volunteer myself an editor for it. Looking forward to future development 😄

I lost some brain cells. Needs a lot of editing.

I smell Something new hope this novel does not disappoint me itnl looks like a combination of reincarnation, system and cultivation world although i read many system, transmigration and cultivation novel but this is one is first

I hate you kennny you B#### I wish you die a slow and painful death without anyone know about you in a unknown place .

The story in itself is interesting but it's close to unreadable. I haven't seen any story that has chapter long sentences, yes 1 chapter equals 1 sentence. No punctuation found. Horrible to read. Pls look up on how to structure sentences or get an editor.

The Novel has many positive points, the writing is clear (although it is missing full stops and commas, but it is not a problem) the stability is good, the development of the story is good (the lower realm was explained very well.) The characters are somewhat unique and intriguing, the world is also very interesting. The problem with the novel is that it gets really annoying at many parts how the MC just doesn't take steps with his harem. He seems like a smart guy and brave guy but when it comes to his harem he turns to meek person. He jokes about taking a step forward in their relationship, but can't deliver. It was especially excruciating when the Author gave him a baby, while maintaining his virginity. Don't get me wrong the MC is well developed in all the other areas and you will definitely enjoy his character. Well overall the Novel has many amazing characteristics, the world created is amazing, the progression is great and character are unique. It just gets repetitive when he finds a beautiful girl - flirts - she likes him - he turns beta and leaves. But that is not a big enough of a problem, the story in itself has many more redeeming features. It deserves the five stars and the Author can take whatever route he wishes. This is just my view of the novel, it might not be the same for everyone. Good luck and continue the great work.

the character is OP as I like and the story is interesting and everything is great but the author needs an editor to fix some small mistake and it can be understood without one if you read it .