Writing quality - It's alright, not too many mistakes and it's readable. Stability of updates - Pretty meh, no real schedule. Story Development - Too centered around main character, he's the center of this world and nothing happens unless he's there. And we still don't know anything about his past life besides he was a (can't think of the right word) wolf scientist/docummentary person who was betrayed by someone that wasn't expanded upon at all. Character Design - Most characters are pretty two-dimensional and the main character is a huge Gary Stu, he acts like (SPOILER) a super genius detective on the latest few chapters out of absolutely nowhere for example. World Background - There's not much to say. We don't really know anything about it and what we DO know was explained in a few blocks of text (swamp clan, tempest clan, blood clan, etc for the wolf clans and their territories). Overall, it's an alright need but needs lots of polishing and maybe a rewrite when author improves a bit. Nonetheless, you should give it a try before making your own opinion.
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LIKEHati_3317:This might seem like a mean review, but it just means you can get better and it has potential. So don't get disheartened by it and keep writing because the only way to get better at writing is, well, by writing some more. You could also try getting tips and help from other experienced authors.