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2021-01-10 11:28

I really am not sure where to start from so I'll jus use the rating.... Ps.... There are a few spoilers as indicated... Writing quality.... For me it was fine...there was a lack of punctuations but most web novels have that problem... Read that it was machine translated at first.... Probably has been edited ... Story development... This is where it really just goes to whack... I mean.. I've read till chapter 37 and the gist of it is that the MC is a worry wart... Who can't seem to get out of his own head... Constantly thinking up new problems for himself and coming up with make shift solutions in a bid to advance the story.... That this does make sense a bit but the fact that he never actually goes through with anything of it before the author introduces another one is just too annoying... I'll really have to express my grievance so spoilers... I know writers do this a lot but just because there was a fore shadow in the previous chapter does not mean you have to act on it the very next chapter... He realizes that in the event of danger he could escape with every one else to the farming dimension and he has to use this function the very next chance he gets because even the top tier wizard that is protecting him isn't strong enough... SMH Character design.... This is the absolute worst.... The only thing that really makes any of the characters different is their names.... They just feel like bots at this point.... Incapable of personal thought until the plot requires them before going back to the bot like behavior... The MC's identity is that of a philandering never do well.... And we're supposed to believe that the 8th grade warrior and his wife who also happens to be an 8th grade mage didn't abandon him because of some loyalty they had to his parents even when he tried to rape their grand daughter ..... Makes zero sense that they still treat him as their lord when he's crippled and the only living member of his family ... Update stability.... I don't know much about the update stability but it's original currently has more than a thousand chapters... It's probably pretty frequent World background.... In this the author seems to have not thought the whole thing through .. They explain the origin of the MC's identity with a plot that feels like they are barely even trying and don't talk about anything outside the MC's immediate vicinity until he apparently finds a book in the library and they use an info dump of irrelevant information that makes the plot seems even more nonsensical.... So you were banished to a town that is said to be barren... That's fine... And there are no people living there even though it's still part of the kingdom... Ok... But while reading a book you find out why the place is deserted ... There are beast that stay in the barren land and attack once in a while... Smh... And the reason it is barren is because the place was infested with undead creatures.... So the kingdom apparently does not have any protection and plan to deal with these beasts and undead and has been letting it fester when it is within their borders... The author has a habit of creating there kind of plot that lacks logic and it gets annoying .. Especially with the MC making no real progress in solving any of them... I can't read this any more....

Bringing The Farm To Live In Another

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27 Chs