Item: The Mikaelson Family in an Irregular World (Paused)
Rating: 3.6
Author: ogre3000

ogre3000Lv54yr

2020-05-29 16:25

The story starts off very good and at around 1/2 way point has kept me completely immersed however after that point it just falls apart.He completely forgets about his siblings and completely gets distracted by every stupid thing.At the start he has a timetable in wich he can unseal his siblings it gets thrown out the window later with the excuse that he has to research the unsealing procedure for each of his siblings but with nothing to specify that he is actually doing any research to begin with.He started off as the caring brother that wants to awake and unite his family wich gets thrown out into the background in favour to building up Japan

The Mikaelson Family in an Irregular World (Paused)

Legendary_Person

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Legendary_PersonAuthor

Thank you for your review.....

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