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ETHAN_WALKER
ETHAN_WALKERLv34yr
2020-09-20 09:16

If you read it its up to you. I personally really enjoy this and I believe you would also. I must also say this is one of my favorites, and with the support of all of us it can continue to grow and spread at a incredible speed. I would also like to think the Author for giving us an incredible story.

Skill-Creation System

Mackenzie_Nguyen
4.7
62 Chs

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Mackenzie_Nguyen
Mackenzie_NguyenAuthor

Hello, my readers! I know that my novel isn't perfect but I am working on improving. Please do give it a try and give me your opinions on it. I also want to thank those who have supported me so far. Please give me suggestions on the chapter comments or on the discord channel. ENJOY READING!!!👍

4yr

ThePandaMan
ThePandaManLv15

I will start this off saying READ THIS STORY. That being said we don’t know much about the world at all and the story develops pretty fast however our mc is very likable and OP and he doesn’t seem to see any problems with that constantly leaving people amazed and it’s hilarious. There are many typos but nothing so bad as to make it unreadable. I would ABSOLUTELY recommend this novel.

4yr
Netherworld_silver
Netherworld_silverLv3

Its good so far hope u don't drop this story ....

4yr
Everything_Forever
Everything_ForeverLv14

The system is very interesting and I like how OP the MC is it's very enjoyable. The romance is really annoying but I understand that most people will want both action and romance because they want to wet there Willy to the sex scenes and crap. It is kinda cliche in a lot of it. The three child hood friends,two of them fall in love and the third becomes jealous and becomes a bad guy. All and all not to bad.

4yr
ArcOfEmbodiment
ArcOfEmbodimentLv5

I just hope no young master and his entier family clice .........................................................................................

5yr
PeanutButterJuice
PeanutButterJuiceLv2

Okay, so I've just finished reading up till Chapter 11, and am about to give an honest review. When the chapter count reaches 20, I'm going to rewrite this. Writing Quality - Grammar and spelling are actually very good, which is one of the main pitfalls of novels. It's readable. The only problem is that the plot/story itself still doesn't flow perfectly, probably due to the text structure. It's a bit jumpy. If the author went through and edited it to make it more presentable (text structure, flow, dialogue, breaks and pacing), it would dramatically improve. Right now, the story gives a feeling of going from Point A to Point B to Point C with nothing in between to keep the reader immersed. Stability of Updates - Rated 5 stars, we'll see how this goes in thefuture. World - Fantasy world with qi and elements, pretty typical. Though so far I haven't seen anything that sets it apart, other than the existance of skills (can other ppl use them, or it exclusive to the MC? I probably just missed this part.). Thought I'd like to see a little twist in the world-building to add interest, it isn't terrible either. Plot - Alex, the MC, reincarnates into a fantasy world with a System. Pretty standard stuff, but it works. I can't see any form of overarching plot or motivation for the MC yet, other than the basic 'get strong cuz why not plus some other minor reasons'. He also hasn't faced any harship, but at this point he's still a baby, so it's fine. I can feel that the System will make him OP. Hopefully some balancing act to keep the MC challenged. Alternatively, if you arent going to do a World Vs MC story, consider an MC Vs World, where the story simply observes the uniqueness of the MC and how his Skills affect the people and environment around him, with indivudal character arcs. Sometimes, I actually enjoy this type of story more. Character Design - Alex, the reincarnated guy with a System. I actually quite like him. He doesnt have any deep character flaws, motivations or even really traits, but as a shounen character he works pretty well. Comedic enough to provide entertainment. I'm a bit bothered by how he instantly is out taking down monsters despite being a twenty-first century guy with no experience nor motive to do so (extrenuous circumstances forcing him to kill), as well as a baby, but that happens in so many webnovels that I can't really fault you on it. Overall, just another shounen-esque battle MC webnovel with a System, but at least the System is more interesting. It's not logical. Don't expect it to be. The System is broken. However, if you go into it with the expectation of it being another standard (and slightly wish-fufilling) binge novel, it's not that bad.

5yr
Ako_ay_tao79
Ako_ay_tao79Lv4

Good story, i dont know if its dropped or something but the story has a OP MC that somehow stisfyingly OP, and there's still a mystery on MC.'s past. Liking the adventure , the current goal, and the lowkeyness of the protagonist but the updating is just [img=update][img=recommend]

4yr
Andeis_YT
Andeis_YTLv3

This novel is very good and i would recommend ist to anyone who wants to see an op mc that isnt actually that dumb beating some ass and rivaling gods. The only problem is the stability of updates but the rest is good.

4yr
Hoeyke
HoeykeLv15

dont drop it....even if update is slow , tell us and most of us will understand just dont drop it....i wanna read it till the end...good job and thank you

4yr
Naim0
Naim0Lv4

Bruh author just release the new chapterS mane😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

3yr
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