This might just be the very first TODG Fanfic which takes place in the first timeline. Also, the Mc is decently OP, not too OP, and not too weak. This may turn out to be the best TODG Fanfic or maybe a mediocre one, if done right and not dropped we might just have a must-read. The Pace is also nice and steady, there are time skips where it is needed and character development is on point. Also, the Fanfic adds realism to the story which is much appreciated.

MC isnt a pervert...I repeat MC isnt a pervert.....MC isnt a pansy that follows nei lie....MC recognizes the fact the nei lie is a pedo...like what more do you want...MC is OP too.. Suggestion: Keep MC OP...make him hide his powers and work from the shadows...dont make him an idiot that does stupid perverted ****...dont make him a saint that helps everyone...though the donation was pretty sweet..thats nice...add some romance but pls build it....and dont make it a massive harem [if its a harem].....GL

Don't mind me, just a shameless author review! Hopefully I'm able to continue producing weekly chapters while improving my writing ability.

mc is kinda dumb. if you are fine with reading about a stupid mc with a overpowered cheat you can give it some time to see if its worth it or not.

I've miss reading TODG fanfic.. I wrote this review after reading the synopsis and the review, was there really no reincarnated Nie Li who's soul travel back to the past.? it will be good if that Nie Li exist then MC will slap Nie Li on the face on how he will steal all the woman and the things Nie Li will got on the original story.

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It's quite good to be a fan fiction, it takes place on the first time line, that makes it pretty interesting, and it actually adds some realism, i like it, i just hope it goes into a harem. It's quite good to be a fan fiction, it takes place on the first time line, that makes it pretty interesting, and it actually adds some realism, i like it, i just hope it goes into a harem.

It's quite good to be a fanfiction, it takes place on the first timline, that makes it pretty intresting, and it actually adds some realism, i like it, i just hope it goes into a harem.

It started off interesting, and I had high hopes with the first chapter. I was really interested in the fact that an insert came in, with no cheats or anything like that beyond meta knowledge. That was sure different. ..Course, then got randomly hand waved for a cheat in a few sentences in the next chapter. That was disappointing. Then there's the lack of character interaction, all it is, is big massive info dumps of what the mc is doing and by god is it boring, there's nothing to spice it up at all by the end of chapter 3. Chapter 3, is where I dipped out. I just couldn't stand the mc on his high horse and his hypocritical bad mouthing of Nie Li. Waxing poetically about pedophile this and pedophile that, without understanding that the ages of consent and marriageable ages were very different in those settings, and being too ignorant to take that in. A massive failing as a writer. The best of it is, he went on and on about how he's just going to use Nie Li for his knowledge to get personal gain and kick him to the curb. How in any way is he 'morally superior' to Nie Li in anyway who for all attempts and purposes, is a generally good guy, granted, good guy in a cultivation setting, but still.