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Great start! Using Present tense to Write third-person narratives is very tricky to pull off, but you seem to get the hang of it. Good luck!

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Delphonse

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thank you honestly I am trying out many things to figure out how best to write the web novel. I am so use to writing scripts for comics that this is all very new to me! thanks a ton for the comments.

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