Review Detail of Immortal_Sun_Wolf in Cultivator in the MCU

Okay honest review here the whole idea was amazing but story it' self isn't the reason. 1: Everything is rushed, the story is developing to fast. 2: MC doesn't interact with other characters much 3: MC fucking didn't change a thing in MCU until Avengers first move. I haven't read after that. Okay something would like to tell. 1: Make the paragraph of only about 5-7 lines and that all a try to write dialogue in different lines. If you author has done writing this story once try writing it again and then give it to your all I will support you. Aside from all that can only say A for effect but just write this story again for only two times as I said earlier and this story will be top MCU fanfic