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BrianGallacher7
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Terrible dialogue, not a very bright mc. Dropped when that conversation with some zombie happened. Had high Hope's and they crashed and burned

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Cultivator in the MCU

Phoenixrd

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Phoenixrd
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Still learning to write however I would like to think the conversational dialogue gets better later in the story. Thanks for the input however I will try and work on that in the future

50ShadesOfAss
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For real.... I got excited reading the synopsis and title but the paragraph structures and the horrible dialogue just completely ruins it. And you’re right, mc is not that bright