Review Detail of afire190 in Re: Akimichi

Re:Akamachi is a fairly enjoyable fanfic with a premise I really like. However, the work could really use editing. There are numerous grammatical errors in each chapter, which significantly detracts from the reading experience. Furthermore, the work as a whole could use some editing. There are sections that are basically exposition or filler and could be cut and integrated more naturally into the storyline. I did enjoy this novel, but I dropped it at chapter 13 largely due to the lacking editing.