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Pretty great just needs more stable development and progress at a steadier pace within the storyline. The focus on character development is moving along fairly well but it has some flaws within the complexity of the protagonist or main character based from how their decisions are based and made along with reactions and vocalization of their personalities.

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Re: Akimichi

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It's my first time, thanks for being gentle with me~