Review Detail of amaturewriter in Re: Akimichi

Don_Paw:I didn't hide it though, I still am wondering why it's not showing in the fanfiction section...

Don_Paw:I didn't hide it though, I still am wondering why it's not showing in the fanfiction section...

DragonkingKyo:rather then wood style give him Jugo's bloodline it fits the Akimichi style with the body transformation know as "sage transformation" and the ability to talking to animals, absorb chakra though touch as while as natural energy absorption

amaturewriter:not op enough against eyes that **** reality........though maybe author could add BS and make jugo BL OP?

DragonkingKyo:how is it not OP his chakra grows constantly he can shape his body into anything or weapon an shoot chakra laser/tailed-beast bomb-like things or make a chakra jetpack and even more stuff

amaturewriter:sharigan can cast a genjustu on reality and revive owners death,,,,sussano gives [almost] perfect defense and the attack power of a tailed beast bomb, recorded abilities if sharingan....a perfect genjustsu.....undying flames....obitos hax........the theres the rinnegan and the six paths [able to revive dead...can shoot lasers missiles...gravity manipulation..just to name a few]....then theres the rinne-sharingan,,...not trying to undermine jugos power but against the magic eyes....body manipulation dosnt seem powerful

DragonkingKyo:the revive owners is last resort as they lose the eye and the rinnegan kills the user when they revive someone(though I think that is because of the chakra needed) but yeah the higher levels of the sharigan(mangekyou and up) and the tenseigan are OP but that doesn't mean Jugo's isn't OP especially if used right.

amaturewriter:sharigan can cast a genjustu on reality and revive owners death,,,,sussano gives [almost] perfect defense and the attack power of a tailed beast bomb, recorded abilities if sharingan....a perfect genjustsu.....undying flames....obitos hax........the theres the rinnegan and the six paths [able to revive dead...can shoot lasers missiles...gravity manipulation..just to name a few]....then theres the rinne-sharingan,,...not trying to undermine jugos power but against the magic eyes....body manipulation dosnt seem powerful

Lize:Errrr.. if that eye is super op.. But why madara juubi can be trash around by gai? Even tho he died in the end.. Then imagine.. if gai can use senjutsu too.. How op he can be? I think having sharingan = instant op.. Is not really true.. If it is true.. then uchiha clan should be the one who control the world.. Even obito with his hax eye.. can be hurt by konan.. Using thousand upon thousand paper bomb.. A girl with out bloodline.. just paper bomb.. Even kaguya can be hurt using reverse harem no jutsu.. The most stupid jutsu in naruto world.. It super effective again kaguya.. 😂🤣😂🤣 Well.. for me personally.. I like to see author creativity.. To make some skill become great.. and still make sense.. For exp.. choji have that butterfly mode right? How about improving that jutsu.. Making it like shunko from bleach.. I think yoruichi have the 2nd stage of shunko.. So try make the 2nd stage of that butterfly power.. Then combine it with senjutsu power.. I think mc can be still op using that.. No need to add other people power.. Just using that original character power but improve it.. Something like that.. 😅😅😅 Anyway.. goodluck author..

DragonkingKyo:also author is this a harem?(hope so) or any romance?(if yes who is love interest)

Lize:Errrr.. if that eye is super op.. But why madara juubi can be trash around by gai? Even tho he died in the end.. Then imagine.. if gai can use senjutsu too.. How op he can be? I think having sharingan = instant op.. Is not really true.. If it is true.. then uchiha clan should be the one who control the world.. Even obito with his hax eye.. can be hurt by konan.. Using thousand upon thousand paper bomb.. A girl with out bloodline.. just paper bomb.. Even kaguya can be hurt using reverse harem no jutsu.. The most stupid jutsu in naruto world.. It super effective again kaguya.. 😂🤣😂🤣 Well.. for me personally.. I like to see author creativity.. To make some skill become great.. and still make sense.. For exp.. choji have that butterfly mode right? How about improving that jutsu.. Making it like shunko from bleach.. I think yoruichi have the 2nd stage of shunko.. So try make the 2nd stage of that butterfly power.. Then combine it with senjutsu power.. I think mc can be still op using that.. No need to add other people power.. Just using that original character power but improve it.. Something like that.. 😅😅😅 Anyway.. goodluck author..

amaturewriter:sharigan can cast a genjustu on reality and revive owners death,,,,sussano gives [almost] perfect defense and the attack power of a tailed beast bomb, recorded abilities if sharingan....a perfect genjustsu.....undying flames....obitos hax........the theres the rinnegan and the six paths [able to revive dead...can shoot lasers missiles...gravity manipulation..just to name a few]....then theres the rinne-sharingan,,...not trying to undermine jugos power but against the magic eyes....body manipulation dosnt seem powerful

RedMonkeyDog:What about like a Titian form for his power . I mean all the other powers in the anime are pretty cool but lets face it it's getting old and Titian form for a power would fit with what his clan is know for just on a larger scale .

amaturewriter:titans are dope,,,but MC needs BS power.cause against eyes that warp reality...being big aint going to do ****

RedMonkeyDog:what about a inheritance of Uranus the first titan and ruler of the universe lol that would be a big Bs power

amaturewriter:but URANUS [sorry could n't resist] aint Naruto