Review Detail of Feebling in Harry Potter and the Serpent Child

Well what to say about this....Grammar? Ok...there are mistakes ( some small, some so great you can't tell what the "author" even means ) but this is fan-fic so a lot of stories here on webnovel are riddled with mistakes. The thing that pisses me off, like REALLY A LOT are the names. Author can't spell names for sh*t. Sometimes the names are entirely different I mean - Gaunt -> Mrax.....how does that even happen? It is nothing like that....Of course grammar with names is also sometimes ****ed up by not using CAPITALS ( even with the wrongly spelled name I think i read "dombles" somewhere as well) .