Review Detail of mozza_mello in The Verlusian Conspiracy

Aaaaa I like dis! :D I really like this genre, so that's probably one of the reasons why I like this hehe! Okay, the writing is great, the grammar is great, and punctuation is good, although some parts could use a lil editing, but hey, it doesn't really matter because it's still a smooth read for me! :D I like the character's interaction, and I love the world-building here hehe! It felt realistic and I like the way the author describes everything hehe Great job, author! <3