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IntanLestari
IntanLestariLv114yr
2021-01-14 20:07

I'm really sorry to give you this honest review, but the MC character is too weak and soft to my liking, the male lead isn't that good either, at the beginning the story said that even though the unloved wife is really good and kind, the ML still doesn't love her, but in the middle of story we know it doesn't true? the MC suddenly love this ML without any reason even though when the ML character in the novel is a cruel cheater, too many inconsistencies in this story that supposed to be mistery but rather than make me more curious, it makes me feel there's too many plot hole, i could see that the author have talent to be a writer but maybe this is not my cup of tea, i think I'll drop this one, Thank you for creating this novel, i hope i could read your better creation in the future ❤️

The Tyrant Gentle Husband

Hana_Frederica
4.2
305 Chs

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Hana_Frederica
Hana_FredericaAuthor

it is okay don't worry

4yr
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Kikelomo_Williams_3635
Kikelomo_Williams_3635Lv1

I actually find the story kind of ridiculous.

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Daoist3CAELA
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I loved this Love story. The couple is Just trying to find a way to find Love and happiness. They are Very strong about their decision to live their own cute romance...🥰🥰🥰🥰

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Gowildan
GowildanLv15

Hi there. I would like to promote this novel to you guys because the plot of this novel really touches your heart... Especially the sad and heart broken parts... Of course, this book have plenty of grammar error.. So, if you guys have OCD towards grammar then I will not recommend this novel to you... For me, I really enjoyed reading this novel so far although there are some grammar mistakes here and there... But overall, the author did a great job...

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PsyberRose
PsyberRoseLv12

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Yareli_Granados
Yareli_GranadosLv14

Fl love her husband but he never saw her for who she is a gental loving wife. Ml ends in a coma and hears everything his wife doing for him. Its until then he realizes he messed up on not knowing his wife

4yr
Lea_Davis
Lea_DavisLv3

Reveal spoiler

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iTride
iTrideLv6

I'm sorry for writing a review without even reading the thing, but the most important part is to first make a decent description. Please make it shorter and compact.

5yr
Sugakookie_3
Sugakookie_3Lv5

I love the idea of the story (the unloved wife of the ML). But if the story was polished it would flow and sound so much better. There are grammar issues which effect the feel of the story. As well as the pace of the writing. I hate to leave a review like this. With a few changes and a good editor, the writing quality would improve the story and background development.

4yr
Daksha_Pathak
Daksha_PathakLv3

I liked the story in the beginning and the concept of too. But the story has too many lapses. Plus the author needs an editor for grammatical errors. Not bad but needs improvement

4yr
joyce3230
joyce3230Lv13

I only read to chapter 4 but couldn't continue. English translation is of lower quality so it interfered in the reading experience for me. Also, don't know if it was because of the translation, but the story was kind of rambling. I started reading because of the plot description but the writing just didn't suit me.

4yr
Retrenity
RetrenityLv13

Cliche transmigration novel, but there are many who still enjoy the same plot over and over again, so why not? BUT, the grammar is bothersome. I don’t want to be a grammar nazi here, but please do try and go over your chapters to correct whatever you can. It will help make reading much more smooth.

4yr
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