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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv11yr
2023-08-02 09:30

Cringe story I remember reading but never reviewed because of how utterly unimpressive it was. I remember the MC getting some kind of cringe 9 pagoda sword and everyone thinking him to be a failure somehow when the fact that it has 9 stages instead of 7 like the 7 stage pagoda spirit should already be enough to make everyone hyped. The author basically forces situations where the MC is looked down on just so he can write his gay "I am a victim" story.

Douluo Dalu 1: Big Brother Of Ning Rongrong.

Ishya_Chan
4.2
70 Chs

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Ishya_Chan
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I admit I wrote this fanfic without clear ideas and full of problems, but this is nonsense. Have you really read it? And "I am a victim story"? Huh, as far as I remember from this hiatus story, they only looked down on his sword at first because it was DIFFFERENT FROM THEIR EXPECTATIONS. Quite a normal reaction. But after they noticed it has nine colours, they were shocked and hyped as they started to see hope from his sword.

1yr
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

I don't know how far I have read this nor do I care. If I think this was stupid then there is a high probability of your story having more such stupid situations.

Ishya_Chan:I admit I wrote this fanfic without clear ideas and full of problems, but this is nonsense. Have you really read it? And "I am a victim story"? Huh, as far as I remember from this hiatus story, they only looked down on his sword at first because it was DIFFFERENT FROM THEIR EXPECTATIONS. Quite a normal reaction. But after they noticed it has nine colours, they were shocked and hyped as they started to see hope from his sword.
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