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Review: (slight spoiler for chapter one) I've read the first chapter and I think it was a good start to the story. There wasn't much information about the history of the world and it was kinda fast paced but I can see that you wanted to start the story quicker so it isn't a big deal. I like the fact that the sages are basically otakus that started the magic system. There's a few other unique things in the story as well. I can see that you are trying to show that there is going to be a social hierarchy in the future. The teacher has a kind of carefree personality and most of the time that foreshadows they will be someone important in the future but obviously that doesn't have to happen. So the story hasn't gone past the first chapter so I can't rate the stability of updating and the story development so I'll just keep them at 3 stars. I think this can be the start of a story I can enjoy so I hope you find inspiration to write this.

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Journey With Cheat Like Magic

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Thank you for your review, and if you want more world background info, it is in one of the later chapters in my fan fic as it originated as the Earth the MC died in, and later brought it back from destruction as a place full of Magic

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I've read the other fan fic (I'm caught up and I'm waiting for more chapters) and I know how mana was created, I'm just hoping that later in the novel if you continue writing, about if there is gonna be things like magic beasts, grades of weapons, or if there is going to be pills. I know you couldn't include that all in the first chapter which is why I posted the review in hopes that you see that there are fans of the book even if it only has one chapter.

southgamez:Thank you for your review, and if you want more world background info, it is in one of the later chapters in my fan fic as it originated as the Earth the MC died in, and later brought it back from destruction as a place full of Magic
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Yeah, even without viewers I would still post, but I am postponing until my fan fic is complete, and also, yes, there are Magic Beasts, as well as Dungeons that will surface, later, and these Dungeons will challenge those who enter with suitable challenges, but this is all I will say right now

MULTICS:I've read the other fan fic (I'm caught up and I'm waiting for more chapters) and I know how mana was created, I'm just hoping that later in the novel if you continue writing, about if there is gonna be things like magic beasts, grades of weapons, or if there is going to be pills. I know you couldn't include that all in the first chapter which is why I posted the review in hopes that you see that there are fans of the book even if it only has one chapter.