This would be a lot better if the grammer was better. There is no editor and it feels like the author never put it through something like grammerly or even into a google docs. There also is no real introduction to the world. Otherwise it’s great.
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Liked it!
LIKEThanks for your liking, and yes I used grammarly for few chapters, it does point fewer mistakes but mostly it gives ridiculous suggestions about the editing and then start to ask buying premium services, compared to the good aspects, it was lot troublesome for use so I did not use for rest of chapters, also for a short story, hiring an editor would be little difficult especially when the author is starving, lol.