It's kinda shameful to review my own novel, but it's a good novel because this novel don't contain a lot of grammatical errors and have stable update in the future, well just give this novel a chance and try it, and I hope you will like it, thanks
SpiralCat
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LIKEsure, ill make it, wait when i write someone speaking i always write like this System: , Eliana: , for the other that dont have : it mean narrator speaking or inner thought, i guess i must change how i write someone speaking
DaoistSoulDive:Can you make it when their speaking they have quotation marks because it's confusing
Author, why don't you publish in the anime and comic section, the people there will find your story faster, in fantasy, there isn't much.
SpiralCat:sure, ill make it, wait when i write someone speaking i always write like this System: , Eliana: , for the other that dont have : it mean narrator speaking or inner thought, i guess i must change how i write someone speaking