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SpiralCat
SpiralCatAuthor2yrSpiralCat

It's kinda shameful to review my own novel, but it's a good novel because this novel don't contain a lot of grammatical errors and have stable update in the future, well just give this novel a chance and try it, and I hope you will like it, thanks

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I'll do anything to grab my wish [Hiatus]

SpiralCat

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jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

will have "romance", it would be interesting to have one with a princess or queen xD.

SpiralCat
SpiralCatAuthorSpiralCat

Maybe in the future, for now i will focus on character development and world building

DaoistSoulDive
DaoistSoulDiveLv4DaoistSoulDive

Can you make it when their speaking they have quotation marks because it's confusing

SpiralCat
SpiralCatAuthorSpiralCat

sure, ill make it, wait when i write someone speaking i always write like this System: , Eliana: , for the other that dont have : it mean narrator speaking or inner thought, i guess i must change how i write someone speaking

DaoistSoulDive:Can you make it when their speaking they have quotation marks because it's confusing
jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

Author, why don't you publish in the anime and comic section, the people there will find your story faster, in fantasy, there isn't much.

SpiralCat:sure, ill make it, wait when i write someone speaking i always write like this System: , Eliana: , for the other that dont have : it mean narrator speaking or inner thought, i guess i must change how i write someone speaking