Review Detail of don_offl in Evil Is Death System

since there are no more than three chapters I was unable to get hooked to the story but I'm sure it'll be very engaging to read after more chapters are released I couldn't find any drawbacks other than some need for punctuation marks here and there. With more chapters this novel can be a great one, I congratulate the author and wish him good luck this is a request to the author as a reader:- pls don't make the mc too much evil to the point he even kill the people tried to help him it makes his revenge against his enemies contradict