Review Detail of TheLastBastion in The Magician of Sound

I think this novel is quite good. There are some problems with it, but it does a lot of things really well. The cons I see have to do with pacing. As is the issue of many novels on this site, some stuff that takes chapters (or large portions of chapters) should of been significantly quicker. There are certain chapters where things are repeated or extended to the story’s detriment. The story could also do a better job foreshadowing the reasons behind things especially pertaining to Kai (the main character), but the novel does a good job with the foreshadowing of the events in the story.