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Fixten
FixtenAuthor3yrFixten

I will give you my own version of pros and cons. You could check it yourself whether you are okay with the story or not. Don’t throw a rant if it is not your cup of tea, and everyone has their own preferences (You might hate a particular scene and remember that others might not). I will start with the cons first and save for the best. Cons: 1.Harem (I know that some might prefer this, and some might not. I will warn you here first if you haven’t checked the tag.) 2.MC might be dragged away by others at first. But he will slowly change as the story progresses and revolves around him. 3.Fewer releases. I am focusing on my main novel, but I will try to do a daily update. 4. I do research the materials before writing it. But it might still not be right, so feel free to tell me If I make it wrong. 5. Just saying, there might be some change in the story as the story goes on. I tried to outline how the story will go. But as the story progresses, I will certainly find that some of my original plots are not usable anymore and need to make new plots. So, there might be some points in this review that might be unusable anymore. Pros: 1. In the modern world, it might give you a better image to imagine the scene. 2. I love writing universal names. If you read the early chapter, you will find many names from other countries. I love making those names instead of naming all the people with one country’s style or a neutral name. (Not insulting others here, so peace.) 3. Powerful MC (?) with some hidden powers that will be revealed from time to time. The same applies to the world itself. 4. Harem (As I said before, it might become pros or cons according to own preferences.) 5. Not going to be a long story, but yeah, considering the length, it is certainly not a short one either. From my prediction, it is around 400 chapters. Might be lower or higher. Additional Info: 1. Chapter length: 1600-1800 words, might be longer. 2. Not a Native English speaker, so my English might burn you. I am trying to improve too, and if you find any mistakes, do tell me so I could fix it. 3. I am open to discussion, so feel free to tell me if I make mistakes or something. You can reply to ‘my’ chapter comments or this review as it is easier to find and read it. 4. It is a fantasy. Some of your logic might not be working in this world. Anyway, I won’t make it longer than this and keep you busy reading this review. If you like the story, please SMASH that vote button and considers adding this story to your collection.

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The Magician of Sound

Fixten

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Yurtle_StrogenBotz
Yurtle_StrogenBotzLv2Yurtle_StrogenBotz

Willing to try to this book came from gacha sovereign and I’m loving that right now.

Fixten
FixtenAuthorFixten

Thank you, appreciate that.

Yurtle_StrogenBotz:Willing to try to this book came from gacha sovereign and I’m loving that right now.
Laoleo
LaoleoLv3Laoleo

You should be careful with: ''3. Powerful MC (?) with some hidden powers that will be revealed from time to time.'' If you want to reveal new MC's powers, you shouldn't do it when a stronger-than-MC enemy is described, If you do that, it'll give a 'plot armor' feeling. P.S. This is only an advice, if it goes against your writing stile, you don't have to follow it

Fixten
FixtenAuthorFixten

Yeah. Thank you for the advice.

Laoleo:You should be careful with: ''3. Powerful MC (?) with some hidden powers that will be revealed from time to time.'' If you want to reveal new MC's powers, you shouldn't do it when a stronger-than-MC enemy is described, If you do that, it'll give a 'plot armor' feeling. P.S. This is only an advice, if it goes against your writing stile, you don't have to follow it
Sverak
SverakLv14Sverak

The not being sure of sound magic seems off to me. TODAY we have the military using sound waves for; sonar, we use 'sound bombs' that forcefully cause confusion in the human brain, we use flash bangs...the sound wave from a flash bang pushes the air out of a room quickly and can pop the inner ear resulting in loss of balance for a short period of time, and they have been testing sonic weapons for awhile now. Sonic weapons being tested; concentrated focal sound points to create a constant sick feeling effect on the stomach and mind making fighting back impossible, localized sound pressure bullets like the sperm whale (the sperm whale can kill a shark from 50 yards away with a SOUND WAVE causing the shark's brain to explode...this animal is alive here and now....why wouldn't they replicate that?!) though humanity can only form smaller ones so far and they don't travel very far, extreme low level sound amplification creating mass loss of balance (downside is it will hit your allies too hence why it isn't a big focus outside of prison system security). Now, if someone can control sound they can also control pressure as sound is nothing but a pressure wave. What can a pressure wave do? Have you never watched a bomb go off? A small sized bomb like a stick of TNT does all of that damage through pressure waves! THAT is the level of destructiveness that sound control brings. Fire, lightning...for raw destructive potential nothing beats sound! Scientists today are well aware of that so I find it hard to believe this world wouldn't think and know about it as well! I mean...controlling sound means you can unleash banshee screams and knock people unconcious through pressure waves bombarding them in seconds. Best part? trying to STOP sound is hard! You have to dissipate it and such defenses would not be mobile. Also, by returning fire they are creating more sound for you to use! If sound is ever an option for magic specialization, anyone intelligent would always choose it. It is far more versatile and is invisible, so a low frequency sound wave would be impossible to hear or see while delivering lethal blows to the enemy. What more could you ask for? Food for thought. I can understand the civilians not being sure what to do with sound...but the military? They are researching it quite a bit in multiple countries around the globe. Submarines even have to be careful of sperm whale pods(groups) as if the submarine disturbs them and they view it as a threat they will bombard the sub with sound waves damaging equipment until the sub leaves their area. usually done with rapid rise to surface which the whales view as a retreat.

MAsteri
MAsteriLv5MAsteri

Agreed. Maybe instead of 'hidden powers', it'll be better to call it 'developing powers', like her learns something new and uses it. Then that can be characterized as character development instead.

Laoleo:You should be careful with: ''3. Powerful MC (?) with some hidden powers that will be revealed from time to time.'' If you want to reveal new MC's powers, you shouldn't do it when a stronger-than-MC enemy is described, If you do that, it'll give a 'plot armor' feeling. P.S. This is only an advice, if it goes against your writing stile, you don't have to follow it
MAsteri
MAsteriLv5MAsteri

Agreed. Maybe instead of 'hidden powers', it'll be better to call it 'developing powers', like her learns something new and uses it. Then that can be characterized as character development instead.

Laoleo:You should be careful with: ''3. Powerful MC (?) with some hidden powers that will be revealed from time to time.'' If you want to reveal new MC's powers, you shouldn't do it when a stronger-than-MC enemy is described, If you do that, it'll give a 'plot armor' feeling. P.S. This is only an advice, if it goes against your writing stile, you don't have to follow it
Real_spam_bot
Real_spam_botLv5Real_spam_bot

That’s not necessary bad as long as it seems earned and has been building up for a while, but I’ve never written a book so be careful about following my advice.

Fixten:Yeah. Thank you for the advice.
lMonarchl
lMonarchlLv3lMonarchl

xD

Real_spam_bot:That’s not necessary bad as long as it seems earned and has been building up for a while, but I’ve never written a book so be careful about following my advice.
DEMONGENERAL679
DEMONGENERAL679Lv10DEMONGENERAL679

IS HE A BETE MC

superlazymagicgod
superlazymagicgodLv4superlazymagicgod

NO..... MAYBE ...YOU KNOW WHAT I DON'T KNOW SENSE I HAVEN'T READ THE NOVEL BUT I WILL ONCE IT REACH 150 OR 200 CUZ I READ FAST AND AM PATIENT AS F*** ....... AT TIMES ..right??

kerras
kerrasLv12kerras

I see you said you're trying to improve your English. If I have the time/energy to do some proofreading, I'd do a bunch at once and try to give some explanations. What would be the best way of sending that to you?

Unknown_Variable
Unknown_VariableLv2Unknown_Variable

sorry my cup of tea just isn't mass unedited machine translation in the first chapter with stolen tropes up the wazoo.

Unknown_Variable
Unknown_VariableLv2Unknown_Variable

no honestly though i would like to just report the WHOLE first chapter as a mistake. and if you've gotten to the hundredth chapter i know you've at least improved somewhat so can you go redo the first chapter so it makes sense and sounds like it was written by a human? the first chapter is the most important chapter because with the concept of this story it would be in the top 20 if it was written in a somewhat legible way and no matter how good later chapters are nobody who speaks proper English is gonna read past the first chapter as it is.

SEISHOKU_SHA108
SEISHOKU_SHA108Lv6SEISHOKU_SHA108

DAMN YOU DO YOUR RESEARCH (MAKE SENSE)

Sverak:The not being sure of sound magic seems off to me. TODAY we have the military using sound waves for; sonar, we use 'sound bombs' that forcefully cause confusion in the human brain, we use flash bangs...the sound wave from a flash bang pushes the air out of a room quickly and can pop the inner ear resulting in loss of balance for a short period of time, and they have been testing sonic weapons for awhile now. Sonic weapons being tested; concentrated focal sound points to create a constant sick feeling effect on the stomach and mind making fighting back impossible, localized sound pressure bullets like the sperm whale (the sperm whale can kill a shark from 50 yards away with a SOUND WAVE causing the shark's brain to explode...this animal is alive here and now....why wouldn't they replicate that?!) though humanity can only form smaller ones so far and they don't travel very far, extreme low level sound amplification creating mass loss of balance (downside is it will hit your allies too hence why it isn't a big focus outside of prison system security). Now, if someone can control sound they can also control pressure as sound is nothing but a pressure wave. What can a pressure wave do? Have you never watched a bomb go off? A small sized bomb like a stick of TNT does all of that damage through pressure waves! THAT is the level of destructiveness that sound control brings. Fire, lightning...for raw destructive potential nothing beats sound! Scientists today are well aware of that so I find it hard to believe this world wouldn't think and know about it as well! I mean...controlling sound means you can unleash banshee screams and knock people unconcious through pressure waves bombarding them in seconds. Best part? trying to STOP sound is hard! You have to dissipate it and such defenses would not be mobile. Also, by returning fire they are creating more sound for you to use! If sound is ever an option for magic specialization, anyone intelligent would always choose it. It is far more versatile and is invisible, so a low frequency sound wave would be impossible to hear or see while delivering lethal blows to the enemy. What more could you ask for? Food for thought. I can understand the civilians not being sure what to do with sound...but the military? They are researching it quite a bit in multiple countries around the globe. Submarines even have to be careful of sperm whale pods(groups) as if the submarine disturbs them and they view it as a threat they will bombard the sub with sound waves damaging equipment until the sub leaves their area. usually done with rapid rise to surface which the whales view as a retreat.
SEISHOKU_SHA108
SEISHOKU_SHA108Lv6SEISHOKU_SHA108

DAMN YOU DO YOUR RESEARCH (MAKE SENSE)😱

Sverak:The not being sure of sound magic seems off to me. TODAY we have the military using sound waves for; sonar, we use 'sound bombs' that forcefully cause confusion in the human brain, we use flash bangs...the sound wave from a flash bang pushes the air out of a room quickly and can pop the inner ear resulting in loss of balance for a short period of time, and they have been testing sonic weapons for awhile now. Sonic weapons being tested; concentrated focal sound points to create a constant sick feeling effect on the stomach and mind making fighting back impossible, localized sound pressure bullets like the sperm whale (the sperm whale can kill a shark from 50 yards away with a SOUND WAVE causing the shark's brain to explode...this animal is alive here and now....why wouldn't they replicate that?!) though humanity can only form smaller ones so far and they don't travel very far, extreme low level sound amplification creating mass loss of balance (downside is it will hit your allies too hence why it isn't a big focus outside of prison system security). Now, if someone can control sound they can also control pressure as sound is nothing but a pressure wave. What can a pressure wave do? Have you never watched a bomb go off? A small sized bomb like a stick of TNT does all of that damage through pressure waves! THAT is the level of destructiveness that sound control brings. Fire, lightning...for raw destructive potential nothing beats sound! Scientists today are well aware of that so I find it hard to believe this world wouldn't think and know about it as well! I mean...controlling sound means you can unleash banshee screams and knock people unconcious through pressure waves bombarding them in seconds. Best part? trying to STOP sound is hard! You have to dissipate it and such defenses would not be mobile. Also, by returning fire they are creating more sound for you to use! If sound is ever an option for magic specialization, anyone intelligent would always choose it. It is far more versatile and is invisible, so a low frequency sound wave would be impossible to hear or see while delivering lethal blows to the enemy. What more could you ask for? Food for thought. I can understand the civilians not being sure what to do with sound...but the military? They are researching it quite a bit in multiple countries around the globe. Submarines even have to be careful of sperm whale pods(groups) as if the submarine disturbs them and they view it as a threat they will bombard the sub with sound waves damaging equipment until the sub leaves their area. usually done with rapid rise to surface which the whales view as a retreat.
WolfEmperormoon
WolfEmperormoonLv5WolfEmperormoon

the synopsis makes it seem like everyone is idiot except the main character because they can't figure out how to use sound magic for offensive purposes and they are living in a modern world which makes them seem much dumber since they have science and should understand the concept of sound to a deep scientific level.

Joel_West
Joel_WestLv12Joel_West

Just the fact that you have a plan with a definitive start and end is enough to get it on my reading list. Thanks! 😁

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