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Jin_Daoran
Jin_DaoranLv104yrJin_Daoran

The character of the MC is shown clearly in the first few chapters of the story, but before the cliche of the cool and emotionless guy in a high school gets old, the plot starts and the gods sh*t on everything. The premise of the story in attractive: a world abandoned by the gods, leaving the humans to face ragnarok alone. Sounds bleak. This reader hopes that if humanity prevails there should be some kind of reward, like the one who stopped it becoming the One True God and not letting all the others back in because of their cowardice, the assh*les. The action is fast-paced, the MC is a wank fantasy, there are monsters everywhere. What is not to like? The grammar is fine, and writing style can come with experience. The story has potential and is stepping along nicely. I hope it lives up to the excellent beginning. Keep up the good work, author!

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Bound to Evil

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Barbare
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Thank you very much! Right now i'm doing my best to fix my sentence building issues that other people have pointed out to me and i will get back to it.

Jin_Daoran
Jin_DaoranLv10Jin_Daoran

You're welcome! Your idea is excellent, and I'm looking forward to see how it develops in the future.

Barbare:Thank you very much! Right now i'm doing my best to fix my sentence building issues that other people have pointed out to me and i will get back to it.