Item: Mana Apocalypse
Rating: 2.6
Author: Roktah

RoktahLv153yr

2021-02-10 22:36

this isnt a bad novel its just not that good. the grammar and the world background are all fine but the mc is a pushover with a hero complex, the story is badly paced. im at chapter 50 and he has yet to practice his skills, his understanding of the situation is severely limited considering that he has plenty of information sources around, his choices when it comes to abilities is quite poor. in a sense you could say he is fairly incompetent while receiving quite a few advantages(gold core, family background). he spends more time on his relationships then actually optimizing his ability to survive during this apocalypse. 50 chapters and i believe 3 days have passed from the beginning of the story. for this novel to complete at the current pacing we are looking at thousands of chapters and the author will definetly not finish that kind of task. it is simply too ambitious. its quite a frustrating read, if that doesnt put you off then you can give this novel a try.

Mana Apocalypse

Ashra

4.5

79 Chs

Liked by 2 people

Replies2

RoktahLv15

story gets better at chapter 50. things actually start to happen, there is growth.

3yr

Genocidal_SoulLv3

Wait, three days in 50 chapters?

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