Review Detail of MeriemR in New Hope Academy

The idea is great, I like that you are giving it your own twist. However, the grammar and style are lacking, This, I am sure you can improve by re-reading and editing. One of the main things is switching between present and past in your narration. Another thing that I struggled with is empathizing with the MC. I think you should delve deeper into his emotions and feelings so that the reader can relate more. Other than that, great effort. Good luck with the contest!!