Review Detail of Kamatis in New Hope Academy

Item: New Hope Academy
Rating: 5

Review detail

KamatisLv34yrKamatis

Well, I didn't really noticed any wrong grammars, so the Writing quality is great! i actually remembered Akame Ga Kill on your story development. When I first saw your title, I thought It's similar to The Irregular At Magic High School and ither academy magic novels where the MC is OP as hell. Well, he's an underdog here. Well, all in all, your story is a good dark-fantasy. Just an advice, if you're going for the dark-fantasy genre, be sure to clearly emphasize the cold reality of life. Because that's the redeeming feature of a dark-fantasy.

New Hope Academy

816D35

Liked by 2 people

Replies2

KamatisLv3Kamatis

Feature of a dark-fantasy. Also, put a decent development to the side characters, but not so much that they'll overtop the main character's development. Well, It's only 6 chapters, so there's still so many things to come.

4yr

816D35Author816D35

I thank you for your advice. It warms my heart when people put effort and time to write a review or a comment. It means that they care about the story I'm telling. I will consider your guidance with the utmost importance.

Kamatis:Feature of a dark-fantasy. Also, put a decent development to the side characters, but not so much that they'll overtop the main character's development. Well, It's only 6 chapters, so there's still so many things to come.

4yr