The narrator's dialogue is a nice touch. It really adds up to this fairy tale atmosphere. There are a generous amount of plot twists, which is good to keep the readers more invested on the story. Good job, Mr. Author. It's a very good read.

The western high Fantasy setting was a breath of fresh air for me. A good change of pace from all the eastern fantasy settings of immortal cultivation and martial arts. World building was good and didn’t feel like info dumps. I enjoyed reading your story :) I hope you keep writing. Keep up the good work 👍

Absolutely love this book! Has all of the fantasy elements with twists that keeps it unique. I find myself invested in the characters. I get mad at the bad guys and not ashamed to say shed a few tears at some sad parts. It’s a fun story with an intricate storyline thats weaved beautifully together which is amazing since theres so many storylines in twined. I’m dying to see how it ends and dreading it at the same time. I don’t want to let the characters go. Maybe author will do a sequel and/or prequel? I can only hope!!

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Nice 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌 If you haven't read this, then what are you waiting for. I like the story so far

Like the synopsis. Okay would read and follow the novel. Nice, keep writing......... 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌

Lovely lovely lovely book. I would highly recommend reading this book :)) Very nicely written.. and nice story line. Can't wait to read what's to come

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With one chapter alone, I am itching to give this 5 solid stars. The way it is written, the way it is executed. It's beautiful. To have a young one hear a tale/legend from her caretaker, a story that includes a female who instead loses her loved one in a clash and not only that, but her mother as well as she is blamed for their deaths. It's very unique in those senses. These things usually happen to a male lead. Without a doubt, I felt emotional after the first chapter alone. I hardly ever bookmark books anymore, but I must do so for this one. Bravo, author. Bravo!

I like this story better honestly. It fits my palate better than the other stories. Well, I have no complaints. What should I write next? Oh I know, write more. .