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The history isn't developed in an smooth way, it just throw everything in the reader expecting it to make sense, seems like the autor isn't preoccupied in make it smooth but in making it a storm of cool things together
The Purpose Of My Existence
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The ideia is very good, but relax a little and develope the history, the conversation, the fellings and the scenario a bit more, will be much better
Charlottes:Hate to admit but your Actually making sense.