Review Detail of Demonic_angel in Awakening of the Ancient: Rise of the Fallen

Item: Awakening of the Ancient: Rise of the Fallen
Rating: 5

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Demonic_angelAuthor4yrDemonic_angel

Ps: Some info- This story will have two main character... Both with different circumstances but related.Also, don't worry, the story won't get confusing because of them :p One Mc will be a one woman man while the other will have a harem. Further info will be released later

Awakening of the Ancient: Rise of the Fallen

Demonic_angel

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LeirsLv10Leirs

Your novel is good and awesome a pity that it has a two MCs too bad I dislike that it's the same concept as there cannot be two tigers on a mountain you should at least make one main character and one heroine that would be better one extreme yang and one extreme yin together they formed the world too bad 😢

3yr

Demonic_angelAuthorDemonic_angel

There's only one mc in a way, the second MC is his father who's a literal god

Leirs:Your novel is good and awesome a pity that it has a two MCs too bad I dislike that it's the same concept as there cannot be two tigers on a mountain you should at least make one main character and one heroine that would be better one extreme yang and one extreme yin together they formed the world too bad 😢

3yr

LeirsLv10Leirs

I see you just make it confusing though 😲

Demonic_angel:There's only one mc in a way, the second MC is his father who's a literal god

3yr

LeirsLv10Leirs

Lastly why did ur r18 scene skipped not going into full details?

Demonic_angel:There's only one mc in a way, the second MC is his father who's a literal god

3yr

Demonic_angelAuthorDemonic_angel

Not really. It'll be as simple as it could. It won't get confusing as if skipping between the point of views. Keeping it simple

Leirs:I see you just make it confusing though 😲

3yr

Demonic_angelAuthorDemonic_angel

I have a detailed version, but I had to censor it for some reason.

Leirs:Lastly why did ur r18 scene skipped not going into full details?

3yr

LeirsLv10Leirs

Where can we read it though?

Demonic_angel:I have a detailed version, but I had to censor it for some reason.

3yr

Demonic_angelAuthorDemonic_angel

Maybe I'll post it on discord, but there's not much demand on it I think

Leirs:Where can we read it though?

3yr