Review Detail of 50ShadesOfAss in Changing Fate(Harry Potter World)

Couldn’t continue. MC is just gonna baby sit characters from the way it’s going. Mc says ‘don’t worry Harry, I will help you with your fate’ Seems like author is obsessed with hermione as well. Mc so worried about her that he plans on telling her parents about the dangers of the magical world. Like you might as well do that for every muggle born. The grammar is also not so good.... the words just don’t flow nicely