Review Detail of amaturewriter in Once More
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Not going to lie...I am enlightened....never knew about the Filipino gods,,,,,,so its interesting,,,,,but just saying could you only write this in english cause its kinda pointless to write in another language cause you translate it..plus it takes up space...but kudos to you for the translation... SUGGESTION;...cant really say anything cause there really isnt anything here so I guess I just give my generic one....OP MC....not perverted or idiotic but smart and cool...just no NTR and pls build the romance and fluff...also keep harem small' **: MAYBE make MC travel worlds before cannon.........ex; Fairy tail like 400 years ago as Zeref?..........or Bleach as Aizen?,,,,,,,,,,,or OP as doffy....just before cannon...........also just saying for MC's power give him something like kyoka suigetsu...that **** is OP.........maybe ryujin jakka or the zero guard captains ability to erase things and name them
Once More
CurseOneII
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listen either you show me a book where proper large harem works or you **** off......................honestly even you know it dosnt work,,,,,[unless some amazing writers with amazing BS potential writes it]
HinataBitchAkamaru:again with little harem how many times have I warned you not to mention
CurseOneII:Well to me I thought of making a fan fiction within a fan fiction since I want to just **** the world since I'm going to follow Ein's footsteps but with a slow MC that would go through different level of worlds