Review Detail of DeadManOG in Magic Forms, Casting, And History

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DeadManOGAuthor4yrDeadManOG

this is just a thing i will do on the side or possibly full time but i need ideas so please wright a review and give me advice on how to improve the novel cause you guys are the important ones in this and im doing this for your plesure so again please give me ideas and advice on how to improve and have a nice day (also my engish is bad its my second language) ;)

Magic Forms, Casting, And History

DeadManOG

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pointless_3ndLv13pointless_3nd

this sounds cool look forward to new chapters

3yr

helloworld420Lv13helloworld420

You could make a chapter where the mc is exploring the outside world and realizes the many dangers that he could face while trying to find a good geographical spot in order to complete chapter three. Also, looking forward to the next chapter update

4yr

helloworld420Lv13helloworld420

Forgot to put a period at the end

helloworld420:You could make a chapter where the mc is exploring the outside world and realizes the many dangers that he could face while trying to find a good geographical spot in order to complete chapter three. Also, looking forward to the next chapter update

4yr

DeadManOGAuthorDeadManOG

Thank you for the idea I will try my best to make the next chapter as best I can with your advice

helloworld420:You could make a chapter where the mc is exploring the outside world and realizes the many dangers that he could face while trying to find a good geographical spot in order to complete chapter three. Also, looking forward to the next chapter update

4yr