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2020-06-03 10:42

I don’t really have much thoughts on the story yet as I feel like it was quite short. The story so far sounds good. At first it seemed as if I’d read this somewhere or was similar to a book I’d already read but then I got sucked into it and didn’t care to analyse anymore and just enjoy. Hope we get to complete it soon.

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The only reason this is a high rating is because the translation quality & stability of updates, otherwise it'd be the lowest score. I've been keeping up with the current updates (don't ask me why) but I want to save others from falling into the trap of investing time/money in a story that doesn't deserve it. There's a lot of chapters that feel repeated because it's just the characters saying/thinking things they've already said. So, it feels like a scam to pay to read something that adds nothing new to the story. Aside from the way they met, there's nothing really to dislike about ML - he values FL & does everything in his power for her. Because of what FL has experienced, she's a character that needs to rely on others to the point of not being able to do anything for herself. It's not until around the 2000ish chapters that she starts to speak out/try to solve things herself (though she's still using the backing of others) but there was no good development for that so it seems a bit out of character for her. Her brother is a loyal to her too so that's nice, but it's silly how his true identity just so happens to still leave her with a connection to her. Also, the novel begins with him needing surgery & 2000ish chapters later & he still hasn't had it yet. I also don't like how he never showed signs of liking this one character (whose family doesn't have a good relationship with FL) but suddenly he does like said character. As for FL's friend, I'm sorry but she's annoying & it's ridiculous that she just so happens to end up having a relationship with the person she does (who happens to be much older & that's whatever but it feels sick as she just turned of legal age). The "love rivals" pose no actual threat to the relationship & serve as nothing but waste of chapters, often repeating the same schemes/conversations over & over again. I like ML's grandmother but his mom is a fool, to put it nicely, stubbornly acting like a child even though she knows her sons/family will not budge on their stances regarding the relationships. & one of the most irritating things about this story is how a certain character will get badly exposed (to the point of being a social outcast) yet somehow they manage to survive, even though the story made it seem impossible. Even after the things they've done, they still hold a high level though they shouldn't based on the writing, it's like the writer made everyone have amnesia.

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