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Kyogu99
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2020-12-14 06:59

This book is amazing, although there are certain points to be criticised, but otherwise the story it great we are about twenty chapters in and the kingdom just gets interesting chapter by chapter, can't wait for more.

Townsvalley : The Lost Kingdom

Yuinetro
4.8
44 Chs

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GCarre
GCarreLv11

Interesting story! I love how precise the descriptions are. You make it easy for readers to imagine the world you are creating. I'll continue to follow your work and hope to see your improvement

4yr

MynameJeff
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The author is a naturally talented writer,He perfectly portrays the politics going between hmthe several states and kingdoms,the novel is a 10 out of10

3yr
Yuinetro
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Reveal spoiler

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isharislynkia
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The story seems interesting. However, there some things that have to be looked upon on especially, capitalizations, punctuations, and few grammatical errors. Writing and paragraphs layout and must be pleased in the eyes of the audience. It's a good story and can't wait for more❤❤

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Sir! The Hiroshima Office Press tells the truth to the Noble People of the Land. It is a great scripture. We truly recommend with such respect and dignity, if you truly want to improve your life and intentions are pure.

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LORDOFORIGINALINK
LORDOFORIGINALINKLv11

Very descriptive some slight errors and mistakes but over all it’s a good read Keep up the good work Peace Peace Peace Peace Peace Peace Peace Peace Peace Peace

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itssYannii
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The interactions between the characters were written nicely and it was refreshing to read the way the author portrays the politics between the kingdoms. I've enjoyed it so far!

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