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Review Detail of HelloChi1d in World's First Demon Lord

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HelloChi1d
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Has a few mild plotholes, and some spelling errors. Not bad in that regard. Only problem I've got with it is that the author's view on certain things can be a bit obviously outlined in ways that do not logically seem to fit the established narrative (basically confined to the thriller protagonist's situation). Ignoring that, always is sad to see a good story get locked behind a paywall. And yes I know that chapters can be unlocked without money. Although interspacing reading can assist in keeping the 'novelty' of a novel, it more often tends to prevent my immersion in the story.

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World's First Demon Lord

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Liked it!

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HelloChi1d
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Also, a bit gay.