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yungN
yungNLv44yr
2020-07-21 16:13

disappointing, mc is an alpha turned into beta, being slowly manipulated by the girl ruins it. and how the author os constantly trying to push an agenda later on is also disappointing, mc barely gets time too. really an author shouldn't heavily endorse their ideals into a story and should make it more 'neutral'. also what is the point of having this story being so heavily into the lgbt community when as far as I know the mc aint a part of it

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Passs3rby
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Hes 100years+ experience in life was nothing but a lie. I agree with you edgelord King and a dog are'nt the same at all but here the similarity is kinda near I love the creativity anyway but the author should widen his principle

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