Review Detail of David_Drake in World's First Demon Lord
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Its a good story. I personally like the gamer and the MCs stories the most. All the other plots seem to be pushing LGBT views down my throat though. Like one story arc happens then we switch over to the MC and get his take on the surprise reveal of the gay couple and the trans person. Where he plays the straight white male, and then all of a sudden his female assistant (which was purposely made to be more competent than him) starts making excuses for her candidates. Ending with the MC being subtly manipulate into changing his straight views on the sexes and into this female leads more gender neutral ones. At this point I dropped the story. I didn't want to read something where there isn't a single person I can relate to. And that the only straight male (MC), was only created to play the fool in this story. The constant POV switches didn't help either.
World's First Demon Lord
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Yea right on the point. A good book would be the one in which we can relate and substitute ourselves into the mc and go along with on his journey. In this story after the 1st 10 chp, the amount of time mc appears is basically reduced one paragh each chp. The rest of the time is focused on the his so called test subjects. This results in every side character having character development other than him. More than 80% of the book is pov of other character. According to me, Pov's should only be used as a side dish rather than the main dish. Other than this, the premise was a very cool and unexplored one the author did a good job of picking it. I have only two ln with the same premise but due to the typical jap mc nature, it was unsatisfactory. The author could also have taken inspiration from Lord of Mysteries on building an organisation whether it be good or evil. I hope that the author gets enough experience through this book to create a masterpiece later on. Have a good day then......
Thanks both of you i personally HATE side arcs/side stories and I hate when pov switching becomes excessive because i mainly just want the MC side of the story i developed this hate after reading The second series of percy jackson đ
Matrixkrock:Yea right on the point. A good book would be the one in which we can relate and substitute ourselves into the mc and go along with on his journey. In this story after the 1st 10 chp, the amount of time mc appears is basically reduced one paragh each chp. The rest of the time is focused on the his so called test subjects. This results in every side character having character development other than him. More than 80% of the book is pov of other character. According to me, Pov's should only be used as a side dish rather than the main dish. Other than this, the premise was a very cool and unexplored one the author did a good job of picking it. I have only two ln with the same premise but due to the typical jap mc nature, it was unsatisfactory. The author could also have taken inspiration from Lord of Mysteries on building an organisation whether it be good or evil. I hope that the author gets enough experience through this book to create a masterpiece later on. Have a good day then......