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grimygrim
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2022-02-06 19:03

First time ever writing a review on a book, and I'm currently on Ch.126 so here goes nothing icl the Tarik and Gadiel storyline was quite boring at first, but it get much better further on as their relationship grows. Then I realised there story is more focus on Gadiel about finding himself in a world where his parent push their ideology on him, with they guy he likes (Tarik) and how they go about that with the ups and downs of their lives. Irade's storyline in my opinion was by far the best, it was so captivating and interesting, I legit can't say anything less than that. Sakura, storyline to me is a complete mystery (no pun intended😉). I love this book, and author keep up the good work.

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EDIT: one thing that would like the most would be more chapters on the demon lord life, and the relationship development (possibly romance?) between the demon lord and the secretary

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Hesreth
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Alright, this novel is gutsy and ambitious. Three entirely different storylines of different genres meshed together incredibly well using that one demon lord. Seriously, I was scared for this one. I thought the stories would clash, and that there would be tonal clashes and clashes for which story takes the spotlight. But this goddamned author pulled it off. And he pulled it off to an extent I've seriously only seen in published books. Alright, yeah, so if you, the person reading the review, hasn't cought on to the fact that I love this book and that this is just going to be me gushing all over it, then let me make it clear. I LOVE this book. The writing is phenomenal. It's set on Earth and I'd say it's a pretty solid planet as far as word building goes. It seems to be very well researched. I can't elaborate on this point really because I haven't had much experience with the character and location and customs settings present in this book, and as a typical Webnovel reader I'm too lazy to cross reference it against stuff, but yeah it feels really well researched. The writing style is great. The flow and pace just fits the story like a glove. It's introspective in the best of ways. It's just great, yeah? There's some occasional spelling issues I've come across but c'mon, that's still leagues better than any Webnovel I've seen on here. The characters oooh boy the characters I love em to bits. Character development and growth is on point. Characters are all hella likable. They are characteristic of how much effort went into this book and how much I love it. Alright, I'll close this off by saying a couple more things sike this brain isn't going to let me stop gushing so soon- a) It's great. b) I love it. c) Yes it does have quite a bit of LGBTQ rep and boy do the characters gain depth due to the societal impacts of that, but it's not the focus of the book. d) I need more chapters e) Hey almost daily uploads would you look at that thank you author f) I have no clue why I'm still doing this. 7) I will not apologise for any time wasted on reading this 'review'

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