Review Detail of ApolloTempes in The Mysterious Black Magician

Item: The Mysterious Black Magician
Rating: 5

Review detail

ApolloTempesLv133yrApolloTempes

This story is a good read to try out. It starts off slow then it gets better at somehwere around ch.40. Most reviews are on grammar, all i say is come on humans arent perfect. Most reviews are also from those who stop at the first 10 chapters and havent read the whole novel. Give it a try If your have nothing to read.

The Mysterious Black Magician

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ApolloTempesLv13ApolloTempes

Someone commented that they stoped reading after chapter 18. This proves my point that they review like the first pages bot the whole novel. it starts off slow please remeber and power Through it it gets way better. Im no expert but Im enjoyIng the story. its just my cut of tea

3yr

MastaaahLv2Mastaaah

Most fanfiction had bad grammar here, I wonder if it's only Asian who write fanfiction here. C'mon! Where's english native?! This is sad...

3yr

aNgelic_desceNtLv15aNgelic_desceNt

Sure I can read through poor grammar. But it keeps bothering me from the plot development. I'm not sure if this is just google translated or what, but I'm sure more effort can be put into this. Especially for those who pay to read.. I pay monthly for reading on this and am a part of some privileges. If this author would like more support regardless of how much he/she has now more effort into grammar shouldn't be too much to ask. I'm around ch 40, and with how weak mc feels right now and how stupid the sentences seem to come along it's a rough road. Other than grammar though, the plot is quite good and enjoyable.

3yr

ApolloTempesLv13ApolloTempes

I totally agree with you, but im all caught up now with the novel and there is less grammar mistakes. I dont know when they stopped probably Asound chapter 100. CH.76 is is pay to read but i recommend just read until then and if you dont like it dont waste your money and use the daily vouches maybe. Take care bro

aNgelic_desceNt:Sure I can read through poor grammar. But it keeps bothering me from the plot development. I'm not sure if this is just google translated or what, but I'm sure more effort can be put into this. Especially for those who pay to read.. I pay monthly for reading on this and am a part of some privileges. If this author would like more support regardless of how much he/she has now more effort into grammar shouldn't be too much to ask. I'm around ch 40, and with how weak mc feels right now and how stupid the sentences seem to come along it's a rough road. Other than grammar though, the plot is quite good and enjoyable.

3yr

Ron_WeaslyLv1Ron_Weasly

where's English native. I get u aren't one

Mastaaah:Most fanfiction had bad grammar here, I wonder if it's only Asian who write fanfiction here. C'mon! Where's english native?! This is sad...

2yr

Guan_YuLv1Guan_Yu

can anyone tell me if the whole novel is like the starting 20 chapters cuz this pathetic author doesn't even answer my questions

2yr