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legendjerry
legendjerryLv53yrlegendjerry

the writing can be a bit better. I noticed that there are some faults in the novel. those can easily be solved big someone was a proof reader or if the author reread what he wrote. It's not like it bugs me that much but sometimes I can't help but notice the mistakes. All in all I like the story, the mc feels like a soab but I like it. he is someone that will not let others **** on him. I am really curious how the story develops

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The Mysterious Black Magician

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Fhrutz_D_Hollow
Fhrutz_D_HollowAuthorFhrutz_D_Hollow

Ty for the review. I appreciate it. Sure I’ll reread the pass chaper and edit it if I have a free time.

GodEndra
GodEndraLv3GodEndra

Try using the free version of grammarly. It'll help you a lot grammar wise and you don't even need to hire an editor/proofreader.

Fhrutz_D_Hollow:Ty for the review. I appreciate it. Sure I’ll reread the pass chaper and edit it if I have a free time.